What are your thoughts on “The First Taste”?

Alright, in the last broadcast I talked about our antagonist, a bit of the plan for her, and worked some more on the short story I began to get get a feel for her, The First Taste. Hopefully, you’ve had some time to look it over so far, and I’m interested in what you have to say about it.

I’m serious. Talk to me.

If there’s been one part of this project — I refuse to call it an experiment — that’s disappointed and discouraged me so far, it’s been three general lack of interest. I don’t have many followers on any medium, but that’s fine if I can get those of you that are following to play along and give me your input. I’m not looking to be famous or a star, I am not doing any advertising except for my own request for donations in my broadcasts; I just want to write a novel with your input.

So why not leave some comments to let me know what you think?